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As she entered her home, Yuki placed her shoes politely by the door, and almost immediately noticed the smell of cooked food. She knew Ying would've been home, but not their mother. And as far as she knew, Ying couldn't cook.

"Mom!?" She called out as she entered the kitchen. Only to find several empty boxes of frozen food dishes. She puffed her cheeks as she examined the paper box mess surely Ying had left.

As Yuki wandered further into the kitchen, she gasped when she spotted not one, but two empty frozen pizza boxes. One of them happened to be a meat lovers, surely covered in an extra pound of various meats. 

"Did Ying have her friends over?" Yuki couldn't help asking aloud as she began her volunteer cleanup duty. 

It was oddly quiet in the house. Void of the telltale signs of visitors or explosive rear end emissions which usually gave away the fact that Ying was in the house. But Yuki could recall seeing, and smelling, Ying's dirty soccer shoes and socks which were kicked carelessly into the living room.

Rrrrrggggllle!

Yuki's stomach stole her attention as it whined adorably at the pent up gas she had held during her activities. Yuki walked over to the trash to throw away the last of the boxes and bent her knees slightly, almost in a half squat. 

PPPppppppppppppffffFFRRRRAAAAAAAAPPPppppppTPttttptTTTttt!

Yuki impressed herself with a long, uninterrupted sound similar to a trumpet. Her flatus wind horned through her jeans and resounded softly in the kitchen. She couldn't help the soft shade of pink which filled her cheeks after it ended with its surprising duration of seven seconds. Leaving only the sent of freshly cut cheese... in the more foul sense.

"Excuse me." Yuki said quietly. Though no one was around, she imagined there could be some spirits she didn't want to offend. As silly as it may sound, she still had the slight belief of ghosts.

Yuki perked up as she heard the sound of distant thunder from upstairs. The all to familiar rumbling from Ying's rear end. Well at least she knew Ying was home, Yuki thought.

"Ying!" Yuki called as she jogged up the stairs. The smell of food became stronger as she approached the top. She was also met with the unpleasant smell of eggs, cabbage and rotten meat. The obvious signs of Ying's gas. She basically followed the trail of Ying's stinky emissions.

Their bedroom was slightly ajar as Yuki almost tip toed up to it. She could hear Ying discussing something about food, not really a surprise. Yuki waited for a moment in Ying's conversation with the unknown to open the door. As she entered, Yuki gasped at the site Ying created.

In their room, mostly situated around the computer desk the twins shared, was a food-tastrophe. Ying sat in their computer chair in only a black tank top and panties, with one leg propped up on the desk, her foot resting next to the keyboard. On both sides of the desk were stacks of empty paper plates and used, crumpled up napkins. In Ying's hand was a pop tart which she had yet to finish. The only other evidence that the empty plates once held food were the few which had some left over pizza crust. Yuki thought her eyes would've bugled out of their sockets if she didn't blink.

"Oh!" Ying said just before taking three large bites to finish of her pop tart. "Hwahay Fhuki!" 

"Ying?" Yuki asked as she slowly approached Ying like she was a grotesque monster. "Did you really eat all that stuff down stairs!?"

Ying glanced at the screen. "Hold on a sec Shiani." Ying pulled out the wireless head phones she was wearing and swiveled in her chair to face Yuki. "Yeah, I was hungry."

Yuki gulped. "H-h-how!?"

Ying narrowed her eyes. "How? You don't think I can work an oven!?" Ying sat back and folded her arms. "I'm not cooking inept you know... if there's directions."

"No Ying. I mean." Yuki glanced at Ying's foot for a moment to go into proper mode. "Thanks for taking your foot off the desk." Then she switched back to her expression of disbelief. "Where did you... how did you... fit it all?" She pointed to Ying's abdomen. 

Shiani could be seen on the computer screen giggling at Yuki's reaction. Though they couldn't hear her, she could hear them.

Ying looked down at herself, she slid down in her chair so she could see past her breasts. Her belly, usually flat, was currently rounded into a dome, no rounder than a distant morning horizon. Her belly only exposed just below her belly button. Ying lifted her shirt with one hand and gave it a pat with the other. She smiled up at Yuki.

"I was hungry when I got home." Ying shrugged as if it were no big deal.

"Ying!" Yuki exclaimed and began naming off the spoils of Ying's meal while counting them on her hands. "You ate seven frozen dinners."

"Really?" Ying asked as she thought about it.

"Yes! I counted the boxes." Yuki continued. "The leftovers from dinner yesterday. ALL of them I should add."

"No one else was gonna eat them!"

"Two, TWO pizzas!"

Ying held her hands out innocently. "They weren't even that big..."

"They were 12 inch pans. That's medium size." Yuki placed her hands on her hips. "And you ate it all in the two hours you were home!?" Honestly, Yuki still didn't believe Ying ate all of that. Though Ying has been proving the strength of her growing appetite recently.

"I finished off the pop-URRRRAAPP!-tarts too. And that snack value pack we got." Ying added. Her mid sentence belch barely fazing her.

Yuki's eyes widened again. "The... those had nine bags of chips still in there!"

"Well now they're in me." Ying chuckled. "Besides, they were mostly air anyway. Speaking of which." Ying lifted a cheek from her seat.

Yuki's hands shot up. "Ying don-!"

BBBRrrrooommp-BRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPTPTPTTTTTTTP!! "Oh yea-wait!" Ying squinted. BBBBBRRRRRRRRRRRRRUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMMMMPPTPPTPTTTTTTPTPTT!!! Brrrpptt!

The chair was shaken by the first, violent butt blast Ying ripped which started off as a mild rumble but kicked up into a loud ripper comparable to a stack of paper being torn in half. Ying did warn Yuki of the aftershock which came with an even more thunderous noise for another 10 seconds. Its power sent vibrations Yuki had come accustomed to feeling, throughout their small room. Ying playfully smiled as she topped off her 'little' monster with a much cuter rip, which ironically seemed to cause one of Ying's empty plates to fall.

Yuki winced as the smell of a pizza restaurant's dumpster hit her square in her nose. There was that strong hint of cabbage Ying tends to have, but for whatever reason, obvious or not, Ying's gas was down right dangerous. Even Ying herself had to wave her hand in front of her face, both hands in fact. Ying laughed at herself from being caught off guard by her own stench. She began to laugh even harder when Yuki rushed out the room for fresh air.

"Whoo! Gun-Damn that's ripe!" Ying expressed as she put her ear buds back in. The first thing she heard was Shiani laughing from the other side.

"Hehe, can't handle your own medicine?" Shiani teased.

Ying cleared her throat. "I can handle it. Just stronger than usual."

"Did you check the expiration dates?"

"They were frozen." Ying argued. "They can't expire... can they?"


People of Earth and Space!

Here is a little celebration peice for my 100th Deviation! (Which isn't this one) This one will be the 101st! WOO!

So this is sort of a thank you to everyone. Though it is short, it involves the two character's I started this journey with and it gives some hints to where these two will be going in the future! If you keep her nose out for it;)
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ninjakillingknight Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
i know you've heard this a 100 times already but... 
CONGRATS ON THE 100 STORIES! :3
on another note, i feel the need to mention how awesome i think it would be if you wrote a part 2 to this! :D
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
A part 2? What could a part 2 pooooooooooossibly be???:)
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ninjakillingknight Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
the aftermath of all that food of course. :3
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Collateral Damage incoming XD
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The-Ch0sen-0ne Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
I'm perfectly fine with this RP break if we keep getting stories like this dude. XD 
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD glad to hear it man:)
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The-Ch0sen-0ne Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
:3 So I see this is the scenario that Ying alluded to in the RP huh? ;p
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ah yes, you do have more clues to the future than most;) But yes indeed
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The-Ch0sen-0ne Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014
I am quite lucky. :S
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GasFetishist Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
What does everyone think the hints to the future are?  I'm guessing that Ying's gas is going to get too powerful for even her to handle.
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Her gas probably will get worse as well as her appetite ;)
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Coffee-vee Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Bloody hell o3o....for this was quuite interesting. For I used to have a girl like this but she wasn't human...as this story reminds me of her a little bit ^^
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wait what? like a girl friend?
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Coffee-vee Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Naaah dude, my OC skunkette xD 
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
xD ah alright, now I see what you meant^^;;
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Coffee-vee Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes xD 
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seriousharry Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
isnt ying fourteen, and like five feet tall?

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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
5'0-5'1, yeah why?
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seriousharry Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
well. i'm imagining this pregnant midget walking around the house....
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much! And why nt right? The cute, shy ones gotta fart too xD
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johnny-wingless Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Gas that Ying says is strong...RUN
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Get your Gas masks!
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Lol0l0 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Excellent story again!

Just a couple corrections I may have noticed, not too big of a deal



As she entered her home after taking off and placing her shoes politely by the door, she almost immediately noticed the smell of cooked food.

This sentence could probably flow better if you used a comma after "home" or by rewording the sentence, such as "as she entered her home, Yuki placed her shoes politely by the door, and almost immediately noticed ..." 


On both sides of the desk were stacks of empty paper plates and used, crumpled up, napkins. 
The comma after crumpled up actually isn't necessary in this sentence, as the list is only 2 adjectives, you only need the one comma after "used"


In Ying's had was a half finished pop tart which she had yet to finish. 

This sentence has a small spelling mistake, had instead of hand.
Also, it's a little redundant to use "half finished" and then "yet to finish", again it's your story of course XD. Perhaps "in Ying's hand was an unfinished pop tart. Or a pop tart which she has yet to finish. 

Ying narrowed her eyes. "How? You don;t think I can work an oven!?"
At this point I'm probably just nitpicking XD, but you put a semicolon instead of an apostrophe in don't. 


Ying looked down at herself, she slid down in her chair so she could see pass her breasts
I believe you meant to use "past" here.

Her belly, usually flat, was currently rounded into a round dome, no rounder than a distant morning horizon
Here, again I'm not sure if you just used the word round to reiterate, which is fine, just sometimes repetitive words can interrupt flow, unless it was again on purpose 

"I was hungry when I got home." Ying shrugged as if it was no big deal.
I'm really reaching here, haha, but it is actually correct to use "were" instead of "was" and again, it's not a huge deal really. 

"No one else was gonna' eat them!"

"Two, TWO pizza's!"
No need for the apostrophe after gonna, or after pizza.

Ying playfully smile as she topped off her 'little' monster with a much cuter rip
I think you just forgot the d after smile




Man, after doing these I feel like I'm intruding, offering corrections and all. If it comes off that way, honestly I just want you to have the best stories you can. 
I definitely enjoy them and look forward to all of your future ones, too!
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Grammar Nazi's... gotta love em. XD But seriously, no offense taken. I'm very, enormously, eternally happy that you pointed out all of my errors. As embarrassing s it may be. It can only help me get better:) And I'm extremely happy that you cared enough to do this for me. An extra set of editing eyes is always welcome:D
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koflegend Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
That girl needs her own fridge. Poor Yuki
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sure Yuki can find some scraps to eat xD
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koflegend Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
You mean if she hurries and hides them don't you.
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Mmmm yeaaaah
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mikeholden88 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student Writer
Hahahahaha, woooww. ^-^ Wonderful story, dude. Can Yuki handle the stench of Ying's farts? :)
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
She can better than most. But she has her limit :)
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mikeholden88 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student Writer
So, if she smell way too much, she passed out? ^_^
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ohhhh yes xD
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mikeholden88 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student Writer
Hehehe, did Yuki like to fart openly or secretly?? :D
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Secretly if possible

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mikeholden88 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Student Writer
I see, so she can fart when she is alone? ^.^
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yeah
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73squiggle Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Well, I can't say I didn't see this coming. One day Yuki'll come home and the kitchen'll be cleaned out.. Hide your fridge, hide your freezer...and hide your cooler cause she's eating everything out there. Good job, man.
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Growing girls gotta eat right XP
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73squiggle Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Serving Size: 1
Serving Size for group: 10
Serving Size for Ying: 87
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syncej Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
cograts on the 100th deviation and great story cant wait for the next chapter
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thaaaaaaaank You:D
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PowerOfSky Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aaand she spent the next 5 hours on the toilet. -w- Awesome work as always. :3
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hope the toilet can take it xD
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PowerOfSky Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sure it can take it. She can't be as bad as a certain fat cat....or a certain wolf girl we know of. >u>
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Very true XD
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PowerOfSky Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:dummy:
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girlfartlover Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
Clever pun at the end there :P

And honestly I do like the shorter stories. I mean I love the longer ones too but it's always nice to read just a little excerpt rather than a page of a novel.

I liked how Yuki's reactions in this. It's funny and adorable how she tries to understand why Ying's appetite has grown 20 fold.

Anyway, WOOHOO FOR REACHING 100! And 1! Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see more! X3
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TheDrifter91 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
xD I'm glad to hear that these short ones aren't a waste. Though I always start off thinking of them coming out shorter than they end up being, but that's fault of the writer in me :p. And thank you on the congrats!:D
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girlfartlover Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014
That's good :3

And no problem ;)
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